Hey all, this is a piece I've been slowly bringing together for about a month, at this point in time I've pretty much gotten the main sections done, but I need some help. In the version I've posted, there's 4 basic sections that occur in this order: The verse, the lead-in, the chorus, and the outtro. What I'm wondering is if I've begun to bog myself down with too many things going on at once, especially at the chorus. I'm also at that point where I'm starting to get sick of this song, but with time that will hopefully pass, as usual. The mp3 can be heard here:
Say Your Goodbyes
Any feedback and suggestions would be a great help, as most of us as composers know that outside opinions can hear things that the composer sometimes can't. Thanks in advance!