Congratulations on two excellent pieces! I really enjoy these, and I do believe that they belong in the Incidental music thread instead. Anyway, I thought both of these were really enjoyable to listen to. In Greem, there is no melody between 1:01 and 1:15, just low strings pounding downbeats. I would have like to see the melody started a little earlier, or have the chords change to cause anticipation, or use syncopation. These are just my opinons. You are the composer, and you are in charge of your music. Well Done, Mate!
Ryan