Thank u serge, i thought this song was going 2 go unnoticed 2 save my life, as for the melowdies, i try 2 intro something new to the yc so that the goal of innovation may spread as did the great composer's works. Thank u arparagus 4 ur detaliation on improvements, the tempo of 111 i used as i usually do, say 111,222,333,122,133,144, etc. for some unknown reason as a sort of personal preference. Fermatas dosen't work well with my composer program so i don't use them & the dynamics below empty bars was just an automatic though needless neccesity. Thank u 4 responding to my post!