Thanks John. What do you mean by sequencing them? Is it they are playing too high/low notes for what they are made for? I hear you on the ending, but I kind of did that on purpose, just wanted to give the song a feel of "what? Oh, you were lisntening, well that's nothing for the tinkgs to come..." Do you get me? Probably not, I don't.
Things I've noticed are that many instruments have a too fast attack and release. For instance at 0:27 the sting "emerges", which I like. The horns and other strings do not, which gives me a quite unsatisfying feel. Must have been to lazy to fix this. It does not run smooth all the way. I don't really like the beginning and the transisions between the different parts, except for the quiet part in the middle. Anyone agree, or am I way off?