Zephler

Hi peregrination, thanks for your feed back. Im not sure that i would like instrumental accompianment, i likethe idea of 3 pure voices creating thier own "accompainment" and sense of harmony without any help. As for the voice leading, yes i agree in places it does feel a bit unnatural, but overall i think it works in some cases (maybe not in all, but experiments have to be done to perfect this right :D?) Totally agree with the Tones of the voices. The vocal trio that sing this dont usually do stuff like my piece, they're a very rythmic based contempory group, but i thought it would be interesting to see how they handled it! But thanks for the idea to write this in, will bear it in mind for the future! Thanks for your feedback, i greatly appreciate you listening and reviewing my work!

I loved the introduction, and i thought u lead it perfectly into bar 9 where the pizz bass comes in. The bass rhythm was interesting and went perfectly with the melody moving above it. Bar 28 into the main theme of the piece was great, and again you use interesting rhythms in the 2nd violins, instead of just a boring "same old, same old" accompaniment. Well done! Overall i loved the piece, the intensity of the section that keeps occuring throughout never stops getting old. The only thing i would say is that the adagio section did seem a bit sluggish for me, but that might just be my opinion! Good work, throughly enjoyed it!

Morivu: Yes i see what u mean now! Definatly something to keep in mind for future projects. the "to" on the first beat especically, it does sound almost awkward in a sence now ive realised it. This was my first vocal piece so alot is to be learnt! THank you for your comments :) Thank you all for your critisism and sharing what you like about my piece! And im sorry for "expecting" feedback! ill get more involved on the forum, its just i was away on a choir residential course last week and had no pc! THanks again!

no feedback at all :(?

Trust me to mess things up on the first post. Its sposed to be a real recording ill upload the proper version now! sorry >.< Correct files up now. Thanks

First time posting one of my works lol so GO EASY ON ME! No but seriously, all and every critisism are welcomed! Its the only way to learn :) This piece is written for Female vocal trio; Soprano, Mezzo-Soprano, Alto Performed at a concert in my University a couple of months ago. Performers : Juice Vocal Trio Words Written by myself Hope you enjoy Score - Compassion for the one I love.pdf - File Shared from Box.net - Free Online File Storage Recording - http://www.box.net/shared/j40u8y2nvx - Aaron Should be the correct file and an mp3 now! Sorry about the mistake