Zemus1

Best composition I have heard from these forums.

Interesting. During 5-6 minute mark, this seems uncharacteristic of the piece. If this is in Sonata form, I am having trouble finding your two tonal areas and general structure. I like your use of orchestration at times and the interplay is fine with the piano. Fun to listen to. Really good work.

Not bad for lack of training. This sounds like it would work well for a rock group!

I would have liked to hear something different in the left hand, or maybe a contrasting section with some mode mixture. Otherwise, it is indeed simple and relaxing.

I found it enjoyable. Did you compose this for any reason in particular? It seems like it would be fitting for some sort of event.

Very dramatic. I agree with adding some fluff. The piece progresses quickly. Cool.

Interesting. Maybe expand the contrasting section a bit.

Hello, this is a short sonata I wrote as a gift. It is four movements. 1. Techniques used It is classical in structure. It makes use of tonal harmony. 2. How long it took to compose the piece About a week. 3. Structure of your piece Movement 1= Sonata form Movement 2= Binary with a little rounding Movement 3= Compound binary Movement 4= Variations 4. Obstacles when composing Lack of experience with composing classical works. Time constraints. 5. Summary of overall piece It is what it is. BSonataMVMT1Allegro.mid BSonataMVMT2Andante.mid BMVMT3.mid BSonataMVMT4Variations.mid