My first post, Greetings!
I've written some blues, and some modal stuff, But it's my senior year in highschool so i really wanted to blow the judges (state music festival & Eau Claire Jazz Festival) away. My issue arrises in the fact that i think i have a O.K chord progreesion but no matter what kind of melodie i wright over it it leans away from charles mingus toward george gershiwn (i want it in C minor and to sound Scary and Angry as opposed to sad here is the chord progression (AABA)
A:
|Dmi7(b5)|G7(b9)|C-(maj 7)|C-(maj 7)
|C-7(b5)| F7(b9)|Db-7)|Gb7|
B:
|Db-7(b5)|Gb7|Amaj + 5|Amaj +5|
|D-7|C-7|B-7|Ab-7|
|G-7 |F-7|Eb-7|E7(#9)|
Then the A section for the last run through starts on a D9 instead of half diminished to release tension from the E7(#9)
thanks in advance,
Jay