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First off, thanks for the welcome! Sorry for the late reply, it piano concerto.pdf

Thanks for the critique and kind words! I changed the notation of the staccato fourth in bar 45, not done writing down dynamics yet though so I

I really think you should bring in the polyphony earlier. The first 10 bars work very nice as an introduction, but after that it just feels thin. The recapitulation of the first theme in bar 35 could use some polishing in my opinion, and the part before the end would be more intresting with just a tad more independence between the voices. Lots of potential in the piece though.

Nice beginning - however, some of the modulation and side themes in first two minutes feel a bit blunt/dramatic in relation to the main theme. I think you could achieve more with something less drastic. Love the build-up at page 5! and good return to the main theme. As for the rest of the song, nothing stood out as off or wrong. It was very enjoyable, loved the developments there.

I recently added dynamics to this piece, which I finished a couple of months ago, so I thought I Piano Sonata in A minor no 1 movement 1.pdf Piano Sonata in A minor no 1 movement 2.pdf Piano Sonata in A minor no 1 movement 3.pdf

Been lurking around here for a while so I figured it was time I post something of my own :) Except for a lot of doodles, this is my first attempt at classical orchestral music I Violin Concerto in D minor no1 first mvt.mid Violin Concerto in D minor no1 first mvt.pdf

All I can say is: damn! Really impressive. The only thing I didn