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I like the change of pace that the second section introduces. Definitely jovial, and in stark contrast to the first section. I think that the recapitulation of the first section could have been a tad smoother though... it is quite sudden and seems somewhat forced. Other than that - great piece! :thumbsup:

Hey Everyone! :D This is a piano piece that currently needs a twist. Currently, only the first few sections of the piece are composed. The second repeat of the chorus needs some sort of change, as right now I think it is rather stale. In addition, I would like the piece to move into an entirely unique direction before returning to the third reinstatement of the chorus. I am trying to evoke the feeling of "waiting" for a lost lover, only to realize that one is better of without that lover. Cliche, I know, but I like the results thus far. Thanks in advance for the listen / critique! :thumbsup: Here is the link to listen to the piece:

I love E Major. It always puts me in a good mood. :D