Good Day Carlly Clabby,
You're the first one I comment here on the forum. :)
I really enjoyed your piece and I personally believe you captured the mood you described quite admirably. I must say the faster paced parts were my favorite and I also enjoyed the Oboe solos.
One thing about your score and the structure of your piece that drew my attention majorly is that you seem to have a very very similar style to a concert band composer Steven Reineke. The slow foreboding intro leading to the quick paced B section with a slow 3/4 section in the middle followed by the random clarinet murmurings back to the driving section is really how Steven Reineke operates most of his pieces (e.g. Goddess of Fire, Symphony No.1: A New Day Rising, Mvmnt. 3: 'And the Earth Trembled,' The Witch and the Saint etc.). The way your score is set up also bears great resemblance to his scores.Also the use of "soar!" in the French Horn parts is a Robert W. Smith thing I noticed (and I quite enjoy seeing, for some reason, in scores).
Overall you have an awesome piece here and I wish you the best with your publishing endeavors. :thumbsup: