Thank you all for you comments. I was aware of the piano part being, for the most part, impossible to play. The piano part is more of a score reduction, not a real part that a pianist would play. Also, as being both a violinist and violist, I find the violin part to be most playable, seeing as while I transcribed the piece, I made sure that I could preform it.
The audio file, Which I made in Resaon, is not a supported file, so now I have to convert it to MP3...so it will be up in about a day or two. I will post the full orchestration of this piece soon. I will alos post the orginal work, for viola, also.
Again, thank you all for all of your comments, they very help me out!