I like it a lot man, good job for a third song! If I could see a score I could probably point out some weak spots so if you want to upload it...that'd be great.
.mus or .pdf file please. :blink:
-Brad
Ok let's fight about where he should host the mp3 shall we...
Good song. Make the melody a bit different from part to part though. After the repeat the melody just repeats...make a different melody there.
-Brad
Encore! :)
Thats really well written, how long did it take to write? I could never write something to even come close to comparing to that.
Keep up the good work!
~Brad~
Bravo! A very nice piece, written in only 2 days?
One minor thing - I think there could be a better ending...
Maybe it gets very quiet about 4 measures before the ending, then it goes fortissimo or higher instantly with a glissando and big ending chord rather than just octaves.
I don't know if that makes sense hehe but...
Nice job.
~Brad~
What I do is go sit down at the piano, Play completely random notes, then I add chords to the notes I played, I work on some harmony then see how it sounds. If I like it, I keep it. If I hate it, I just change the notes around a bit.
~Brad~
Amazing. I really reply to every thing on here with that.
I can't write something to even compare to that. How old are you? How long did it tak to compose?
~Brad~