I really liked it. It was really far out and intens. You are very talented and you have a future as a composer but you need to work on getting the music a little bit more togheter.
If you want my advise you should analyse the music that you love and just let it sink in to you. I don't know what music you like but the way this piece sounds like I think you should listen to some King Crimson and Frank Zappa.
When it comes to music theory be carefull. It's a great thing to know, and you should know it, but it can really mess you upp if you approach it the wrong way. What you hear and feel is always the right thing. Music theory is just a way of explaining the stuff you hear. It is never a ruel unless you want to write some music in a serten style. Otherwise there are no rules.