A good piece of work. Without knowing anything about the film, it's difficult to say if it would work in that context. In any case, I think it's a well written piece. I agree with the reviews above about the ending, but that's nothing that can't be sorted out! Personally I'm a VSL fan, but to be honest, I always feel that GPO (and others) seems to lend itself to getting that "Hollywood" film sound. Thanks for sharing it with us!