thanks for the comments.
jaime: that was probably my subconscious intention. i might do that glissando now.
benlunn: i'm aware the brass is used fairly basically, as i was using basic brass samples. when i get this played i might add some mutes here or there.
maxunit: i love your interpretation, and i would say yes that is the feeling that I'm going for although never thought of it really.
again, thanks for the feedback, i really appreciate it.