Right feeling inspired after listening to tubular bells with the polyrhythms and layering etc I became inspired to write something a bit different to usual, push my limits create some funky music.
Thing is I've got so far and I've started hitting a road block musically and I'm wondering if I'm just meandering compositionally towards a dead end.
It's starts with a piano melody in 6/4 and then a counter melody comes in playing in 4/4 (00:03) on the repeat. Then after a bit the 4/4 piano melody (which is two bars long) is changed (note values) to a 6/4 melody (00:15) where the note values now match with the main theme. Then a 6/4 bell stab (00:21) comes in followed by brass (00:34) that doubles it by an octave but sustains the notes.
This build up is then released with just the main melody, 2nd counter melody and a bass line provided by some synth brass in 3/4 timing (00:46). Then the notes of the main melody are altered to be in 5/4 by playing same two notes of the original one at the same time and my use of rests (00:58).
In this piece I aim to make use of time signature changes, polyrhythms and some aspects of serialism and I'm inspired by tubular bells (as I said before) and various progressive bands.
Really all I want is to know how well I've done so far, if it sounds good or rubbish and if the latter how to improve/make it flow better.
Personally I think it sounds mostly alright, (I start to lose my conviction during the 5/4 version of the main melody) and I think all I really need is maybe some ideas on how to make music that changes around this much flow better and maybe some educational links to sites which can teach me things I probably should know.
I also wrote the guide to how it goes because I don't have a score to show.
composition.mp3