Thanks for the advice! In this piece I tried to modulate in an organic manner but maybe I should shake things up a little.
So both of you think that the build-up is to short, eh? What if it is just a teaser of more to come ;) ? That's how I think I wrote it. Anyhow, don't you get bored with the same accompaniment all of the time?
I think that is what demotivates me from continuing, I can go hopping from key to key making transitions to the main-theme in major/minor keys for ages and meanwhile the accompaniment continues: monotonous