You arse.
Your pretentious comments honestly have made me feel quite sick, not to mention your abomination that you have the audacity to call music never mind a concerto.
Who are you to waltz in and decide that you're the greatest composer in history? When so many who have gone before you, and indeed many today have stuggled and worked for years on end learning what it is to be a composer; an instrumentalist; a conductor. The truth is that you cannot just decide to be the greatest, that alone is the oppinion of those who hear your music.
You said that the composers mentioned by WS are not relevant to our time... yet, you chose your name to be "@TheGreat12Tones" which is something of a contridiction is it not?
I mean:
1 - If your name is based up the 12 tone technique largely attributed to the music of Schoenberg, then you yourself have made his music relevant to today. Also Schoenberg did not dismiss the past as not being of relevence, he saw his 12-tone technique as the natural progression of western music. Also you'll find many of his forms are derived from those invented by composers of the past
2 - If the past is so irrelevant, why do you have 12 tones? Surely this is something invented and perfected by hundreds of years of musicians?
3 - You call your work a concerto, a form invented by other composers.
"Also, my music training is of the highest degree." Surely you could tell us lesser mortals what training you acctualy have?
Please do yourself a favour. Delete this work, apologise to the people of YC, and unless you wish to write some serious music rather than this ill thought through tripe the don't attempt compose again.