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  1. It's a midi so you can get the score easily.
  2. I clearly see this music is crap.
  3. This music I made doesn't deserve being here, some day I will delete it.
  4. Start and end the improvisation with a variation on the theme of Bach's musical Offering. Use a stretto. If you want to use the fifth progression, use a more or less chromatic theme along it.
  5. A 2 voice baroque prelude I wrote for a special person's Birthday. Despite it taking a quite a lot of time to write it, I still have my doubts about whether a young lady would like to receive a song full of minor chords and tension as a birthday present. Now seriously, I think it's better than my other pieces. It has subject and counter-subject, variated and mixed many times (along with scales and some arpeggios) with modulations and many counterpoint resources (suspensions, resolutions, inversions, false entries, etc.). And also with chromatic variations on the subject and some chromatic phrases.Starts in C minor, goes through several keys, and ends in C major. Lia's Birthday prelude
  6. A fast 2nd part for the previous song I made for Lia, using motives from the previous song (circle progresions) and new ones (I-V-V-I-IV-V-I-V). I have been working on this for several weeks, and I'm afraid it's a bit too long: I might have played too much with the same harmonies and rythm patterns.Using mostly baroque (but also romantic) resources, simple and common harmony with modulations, lots of tension and dissonances (some of which are meant to be there) and a "soathing" end.Some octaves are meant to be there in parts of the song where separation between the voices is not sought (the end of it). Others are mistakes (despite my efforts) or the less bad possibility.I added some short modulation at 00:55 to reduce the reiteration of the main motive, but I'm not sure if it's appropiate. I'd like to receive some feedback on this.Also, I'm not sure what music form it belongs to; at least playing it is too easy to be considered a toccata.Lia's song 2nd partLia's song 2nd part A song for Lia 2nd part
  7. 1.- Thanks for your comment, I think I need criticism and I appreciate it. I'm a begginer, a student. And I did it some time ago. 2.- When I composed it, I was thinking of a necklace with a camel. 3.- I will try to fix the errors you pointed out, but I'm afraid that going over the whole thing detail by detail might be more time-consuming than doing it all over again.
  8. A short and simple fugue (2 part armony) I wrote some time ago; it doesn't follow completely the fugue structure. Baroque style.Camel Fugue Camel Fugue
  9. A 2-part piano piece I, being a music student with poor composing skills, made for a special person called Lia; with the resulting "song" being better than expected and making me proud of it. I used chiefly baroque resources, but also romantic ones. Creative Commons license by-nc
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