Thanks Dante.
Yeah, my brother pointed the same issues, he said the Tuba and Trombone runs were a bit much, and a little high. I agree with what you said about the repetative trumpet parts. My bro also mentioned that the F-Horn part is not bad, it's just sightly out of F-Horn comfort range. But, I wrote it very quickly, (like in half an hour) and I didn't do any editing afterwards, so maybe I'll do some editing.
For some reason, I really like the sound of a great brass quintet... i.e. Canadian Brass, Empire Brass Quintet, so I want to continue writing these kinds of pieces. Of course eventually, I want to start working on larger ensemble pieces too. But thanks for the tips.
Have a blessed day friends.
Heshi,
Daniel