Thank you very much for your comments.
I do understand (for all the reasons you mentioned, and much more), that my pieces arenot v good. Thus, i find it natural since I just started.
About the music theory thing. My knowledge is limited to the, do, re, mi.. (c, d, e....). In other words to the.... most basic parts, and I composed these two pieces by plugging in my keyboards (to my pc), and recording what I 'm playing (that's why the tempo of "One" is 182 - and... it is a slow piece).
Oh, well... I 'm not planning on continuing with the "I 'm theory-less" truth, because that would be really stupid and close-minded of me. So I guess I should start studying theory immediately.
-Thanks in advance
PS. Um... don't mind me asking, but could you give me some pointers on what kind of books I should get, or if there is a special category for composing ? Or maybe... someone out there willing to spend some time helping me out ?
PS2. Oh, I wrotte a new one. It's longer than the others, and in kinda different mood. I 'm kinda pleased... (considering it took me around an hour, composing it and playing/recording it). But yet an amateur's work.
New) http://www.freewebs.com/velvet_blasphemy/Bariomoun.mp3
(folk like)
Here is the midi file of 'One'
one.mid