Morivou Posted February 29, 2008 Posted February 29, 2008 M_is_D Juji's Review of M_is_D's Piece: http://freewebs.com/jujehmufeh/january/COMMENT_-_Variations_on_Fado_de_Fogaceiras.pdf Morivou's Review: 1. Form (5) -Did they use at least 4 variations? Yes. -Is the theme strong? Yes. 2. Development (5) -Does the piece flow? Yes, it flows very nicely; you have a VERY good ear! Keep it up! 3. Notation (4.25) -The score is laid out correctly. For the entirety of Variation 1, when you have the piano part playing 1 note per measure, please get rid of the excess rests, and this goes for the entire piece but mainly here. (-1/2 pt.) -The score is neat, and is effective and practical for real life usage. In measure 25, the piano part seems unplayable
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