Intermezzo (intermède) for Orchestra

Hi all with the new websiste, I re-upload, one of my work. An intermezzo for orchestra.

Thank you in advance for all the feedback.

Here is the link to the score : Score

I think that you have some very pretty and somber gestures here expressed in a very convincing way with your minimalist instrumentation. But even minimalism (and it's very possible that you have not conceived it as such) requires an arc, which is lacking here, in my opinion. I envision achieving this arc with the aide of cinema. It's thorough mood is well suited for cinema. Would you agree?