Untitled Duet for Violin and Piano

I wrote this piece not too long ago for my composition teacher, who asked me to write something for just two instruments. The sheet music isn't very detailed right now, but I'll attach it anyways. Let me know what you think!

I like it. Very peaceful and not long. In my opinion it doesn't really leave much of an impression. There's not really a melody, just sustained chord tones with minimal movement. Which is totally fine if you intend it to be atmospheric and laid back. It works well that way, which is why I like it. I'm sure your composition teacher will give you better feedback than lil ole me, but thank you for sharing it.

10 hours ago, KJthesleepdeprived said:

There's not really a melody, just sustained chord tones with minimal movement.

 

I felt that way too. But it's pretty, so what you weigh over what isn't really my business.

In measure 25, I'm wondering why you chose to put Cb instead of B natural, because you have the D natural coming after it, and it would make more sense for it to be a B minor going to G major.