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old work, revised. probably testing finger flexibility to the max

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I think you are very good at creating an atmosphere in just a few bars. After some time though, I feel like this piece needs a contrasting, slower section. At some point I start to hear a machine instead of a piano. By creating a moment to breathe, you could make the whole piece a lot more interesting.

Good job!

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Reminds me a little of Prokofiev's Toccata with the driving repeated notes in the opening.  I enjoyed it a lot, though I agree with Dirk that a contrasting section would be welcome as the frenetic pace of the work throughout is almost too tiring for my ear at least.

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