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Hi.

My suite "The Four Elements" will soon be published, but i still have some time to give it another look and try to make some improvements.

I would be really happy to have the input of other composers and music lovers. If you have the time, please take a listen and let me know what you think.
Today i will be working on the third movement: "Air"

Thank you!
=)

I think this is original and very beatiful.

Only an observation: in the "forte" parts, there is a background "rumour" that disturbs a little. I don't know if it's the pedal or what: 1:50 - 2:20

thank you, i appreciate that. i will listen to that part and see if i find what you mean.
:)

I also mirror Luis's comments for the most part. To be honest, I was a little put off the intro considering it was a lot of C9 and not much else, but the rest of the piece was great.

yes, there is not a lot of harmonic movement on the intro, but maybe that is how "Air" is...    :P

Thanks for the comment!   =)