Jared Steven Destro Posted August 26, 2016 Posted August 26, 2016 Hey guys! So, I'm a little mentally exhausted -- I'm just after writing nine pieces in the past three days (which will all be uploaded soon.) This is my first true chamber sonata for oboe and piano, and I hope you guys enjoy. I really enjoy writing in this form, so let me know what you think and thanks for the help. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu I. Allegrissimo alla breve II. Adagio dolce III. Rondeau - Presto con brio > next PDF Oboe Sonata No. 1 in F major Quote
Luis Hernández Posted August 26, 2016 Posted August 26, 2016 It's OK. But I'm not very fond of classic style. I see that in some parts you push the piano into the background, I mean vith simple vertical chords (as in the adagio). The rondeau is where I find a btter balance between the instruments. Well, in fact, the piece is named "Oboe sonata"..., so, it's your choice, of course. Quote
Jared Steven Destro Posted August 26, 2016 Author Posted August 26, 2016 15 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said: It's OK. But I'm not very fond of classic style. I see that in some parts you push the piano into the background, I mean vith simple vertical chords (as in the adagio). The rondeau is where I find a btter balance between the instruments. Well, in fact, the piece is named "Oboe sonata"..., so, it's your choice, of course. Thanks, Luis. Your preferences are your own, of course, but I myself am very fond of the style. I appreciate the input nonetheless! Quote
orchdork02 Posted August 26, 2016 Posted August 26, 2016 Hey I just listened to the first movement for now, and it's really pleasant music. The chromatic touches to the melody were nice, and it reminded me of Mozart. Sometimes the oboe part seemed very difficult in the highest register of the instrument, but I'm no expert. The one place I thought needed more moving notes to keep it going was the little Adagio spot, where the piano chords are kind of boring. Nice work! Quote
Monarcheon Posted August 26, 2016 Posted August 26, 2016 31 minutes ago, orchdork02 said: ...I thought needed more moving notes to keep it going was the little Adagio spot, where the piano chords are kind of boring... My sentiments exactly. The style in opinion gets pretty repetitive after you analyze the piece for a few minutes. Maybe it's purely an audience piece so that wouldn't be an issue, but that's what I saw. For example, I think it's really beautiful in places, but when you hear chord progressions instead of notes, it gets kind of monotonous. Quote
Jared Steven Destro Posted August 27, 2016 Author Posted August 27, 2016 49 minutes ago, orchdork02 said: Hey I just listened to the first movement for now, and it's really pleasant music. The chromatic touches to the melody were nice, and it reminded me of Mozart. Sometimes the oboe part seemed very difficult in the highest register of the instrument, but I'm no expert. The one place I thought needed more moving notes to keep it going was the little Adagio spot, where the piano chords are kind of boring. Nice work! Thanks for the comment! I'm not too sure on the skill requirements for this piece, as I'm not an oboist, but I'm sure it's somewhat difficult, as you mentioned -- I didn't want to make it too simple, yet I'm unsure of I made it too difficult -- I'll only know with a performance. Regarding the adagio section, here I lowered the skill level down quite considerably to allow for a respite, but I understand your criticisms about the piano. I hope you give the other movements a shot and I will become uploading my other sonatas soon. Quote
Jared Steven Destro Posted August 27, 2016 Author Posted August 27, 2016 21 minutes ago, Monarcheon said: My sentiments exactly. The style in opinion gets pretty repetitive after you analyze the piece for a few minutes. Maybe it's purely an audience piece so that wouldn't be an issue, but that's what I saw. For example, I think it's really beautiful in places, but when you hear chord progressions instead of notes, it gets kind of monotonous. Thanks, Monarcheon, for the input. This style certainly isn't for everyone, but I gave it all I had. Stayed tuned for more! Quote
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