Sketch No. 44 - The Red Sea

Sketch No. 44 was originally a piano piece, but after I wrote it, I decided to write it out into an orchestra piece on the same day. This is very loosely based on the story of Moses. I'm not a huge fan about how I wrote the ending, but I think it works enough to serve the point of the piece. Split into two basic sections, the Largo and the March, I was hoping to have two distinct, relatively well set-up ideas for it. Would love to hear what you all think!

Wow, this is great. I love the two parts and they suit together well. The insistent rhythm of the March is envolving.  Yes, the only thing I would rework a little is the end, because it sounds like an organ almost a full blast. But there is wevy good material.

@Luis Hernández Thanks for your comments; glad I'm not the only one who thinks so (in reference to the end).