Guitar work (punk)

Been playing guitar for a while and punk is my favorite genre. As with my orchestral themes, I lack the ability to actually read or write music instead I play and create by ear. 

This one I just sat down and free formed it. The quality isn't as good because I just put the microphone close to a small practice amp but you can still hear what I'm getting at clearly. I recommend headphones since it wasn't mixed. It's more treble than bass so I usually turn down the volume when using headphones.

This one is interresting because it seems to be almost in some sort of T&V rules... a progression with different takes on it. The only problem is that it never reinvents itself really. It largely stays monotonous throughout. I can never really get a sense of an STA. This is the danger of free form or improvisation I think you should keep in mind. Rarely are you going to get a result stays fresh throughout.

Really? I always thought that was how punk rock was suppose to be haha. Well considering I took advice from a fellow friend and guitar player who is always drunk while playing I can see where you will be right