Interlúdio (Interlude)

This is, in my opinion, the most beautiful piece of music I have ever written. Enjoy^^

Hm. It's motivic, definitely. Does it hold itself together all the way through? Yes, but it seems like that consistency was slightly jarred, perhaps due to the slightly unstable rhythm in the recording.
Your "natural" resolutions I'm going to call them, to D minor and A minor, in order, broke the flow for me. It made the piece feel sectionalized when it clearly wasn't and it seemed a waste of potential.
Regardless, that was the main thing. Most of it flowed nicely. You use appoggiaturas very nicely throughout with a very clever deception in dynamics. Similarly, when things do intentionally take an atmospheric turn, a nice juxtaposition of buildup and settle down is used, but not the point where it becomes overdone.
Nicely done.

Very nice!

I love the airy feeling in the beginning and how in some parts the music descends to "the earth".

I also like other aspect of your music: the scores... Very elegant and detailed (I think it's important).

I do think it's beautiful.

The whole piece is like a kind of descent. At first, it just gently floats down through the air. As the piece goes on, it picks up a little velocity, but the landing is still pleasant. That's my impression of the music, anyway.