piano music Resumption

Hello,

This is my new piano music, It's very short, but this was my intention. I'm really interested in your opinion. 

Wow...that was really good. Piano isn't my strong suit so listening to stuff like this is very motivating. It's so precise and elegant.

Nice.

Thank you Samurai! : ) 

Please...call me Samurai L. Jackson hahaha....

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Very nice. I perhaps think that the ending was a little bit too abrupt, after so much buildup in speed and dynamics. It was rare, but sometimes your borrowed b6 chord was awkward probably after the cadence to the one, where a "deceptive" use of it would be very logical. Not too much to say here though; good work.

 "It was rare, but sometimes your borrowed b6 chord was awkward "

Maybe you're right, but it's just an attemption. I didn't compose music for a long time, because I didn't have much time for this.  Now, I'd like to compose a symphony, but I have been searching for the theme... 

I really enjoy it. I agree that the ending is unexpected. You seem to be building to a sort of big finish. But perhaps it was your intention to end differently than expected? If so, then I suppose it's successful. But it's all to do with your intentions. Other than that, I thought everything was wonderful, and a bit moving.