Three Sententiae for Piano Op. 284

These are my Three Sententiae for Piano Op. 284.

Here is the link to my previous set of three sententiae for piano:

http://www.youngcomposers.com/archive/music/listen/8050/three-sententiae-for-piano-op-262/

1. Polyrhythms were enjoyable. Maybe not a single many chords were necessary, and I felt the ending was tagged on and awkwardly abrupt.

2. We know what's happening as the performer, but the audience will hear a Regular 6/8 rhythm instead of a syncopated one. Either shift it or add accents to make it more clear.

3. I don't see the gimmick here. It just seems out of place and not part of the collection.