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hello everyone, i m back with my new piece, just listen to it, appreciate it and comment on it.

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The 'staccato' sections are too similar to Chopin's op. 25 no. 4(? It's been a while). I sincerely think that your time would be better spent writing shorter, more well-thought-out pieces than what you have here.

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I mostly agree with johnbucket. It's far too sectionalized and needs more structural and occasionally harmonic development. Nothing wrong with a collection of ideas but it doesn't seem as coherent here.

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