cloud10000 Posted November 14, 2016 Posted November 14, 2016 (edited) hello everyone, i m back with my new piece, just listen to it, appreciate it and comment on it. Edited November 14, 2016 by cloud10000 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Op100 Staccato > next PDF Op100 score Quote
johnbucket Posted November 14, 2016 Posted November 14, 2016 The 'staccato' sections are too similar to Chopin's op. 25 no. 4(? It's been a while). I sincerely think that your time would be better spent writing shorter, more well-thought-out pieces than what you have here. Quote
Monarcheon Posted November 14, 2016 Posted November 14, 2016 I mostly agree with johnbucket. It's far too sectionalized and needs more structural and occasionally harmonic development. Nothing wrong with a collection of ideas but it doesn't seem as coherent here. Quote
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