Bleum Posted November 28, 2016 Posted November 28, 2016 Hello :) Please listen to this demo;;; i'd appreciate all feedback. [this is in draft form] beats, -bleum Quote
Monarcheon Posted November 28, 2016 Posted November 28, 2016 More chord variation is one thing, but the ostinato rhythm continues without change for, I think, way too long. The singers are out of tune, both sharp and flat depending on the note. It just sounds so unassuming; I want to hear more happen. I want to feel emotion, rather than be complacent. 1 Quote
Bleum Posted November 29, 2016 Author Posted November 29, 2016 Thanks for your valuable feedback. im going to take each part into consideration and see how I can improve it. is there anything about the piece that you liked? -bleum. Quote
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