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This is a track I was working on for a game. Its for a Jungle exploration area. Any feedback would be great!

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7/8 was an interesting choice here and I think it paid off. I think more emphasis on the bassline in the marimba(?) would be nice. The jump to the louder section was too abrupt if it's being used in a playable area. Throwing some custom dynamics processing couldn't hurt either... makes thing sound more progressive. Maybe a couple more chords could help too, but on the whole it was really quite nice. 

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Much like your other work entitled "Dream" I can't help but feel like there is so much more that can be brought out here. The piece itself is absolutely terrefic but I was waiting for that high explosive and epic moment that will send me through the depths of the jungle.

Nonetheless I really enjoyed this and it reminded me of the Lion King haha. The vocals in the background were perfect.

Good work on this!

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Awesome! Thank you Samurai...so basically Im missing the wow factor the climax of the piece...I think I can work on that. Thank you again for your comments!

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Well I suppose it depends on what part of the game this going to fit into. Like if this is meant for an introduction trailer then a climax would be nice but if this is meant to be played and looped during player controlled gameplay then that's perfect as well.

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