vp4VP Posted December 11, 2016 Posted December 11, 2016 I wrote this yesterday and did some minor editing and mixing today. Looking to use this in a game Desert type area. Any feedback and suggestions welcomed. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Desert > next Quote
Monarcheon Posted December 11, 2016 Posted December 11, 2016 Your tonal modulations are quite nice. However, your atmosphere changes are quite sudden sometimes, especially going back to something softer. I would also add another motif to work with. The main scale one gets a bit tiresome to me, and elongating it with multiple things can lead to a section with overlap later. Parallel fourths also seemed out of place here. Quote
vp4VP Posted December 12, 2016 Author Posted December 12, 2016 Thanks Monarcheon, I have to go back and edit some parallels. Quote
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