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Another track WIP for my album.

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I thought the treble in this one was far too overbearing. At 1:16 your chords and melody start to overlap in weird ways due to the non-harmonic tones. Your efforts to change things shouldn't result in uncomfortability. The minimalistic style was perfect here though, it seemed canonical and flowed well. Look at Electric Counterpoint for an explanation. The general theoretical feel of this one is really good! Just change some levels and it would be a lot more smooth.

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