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i have aids, i have 2 months to live and i don't think i'll ever be able to record it. my funeral will be nothing but fury from the people i gave aids

i wrote this composition

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Interesting use of consistent melody through the shifting chords. The use of time signature shifts was also quite nice to hear.
I would simply change the chords a little more within phrases. You do change chords which is great but having it alter within phrases would have been an awesome change.
Good luck.

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