horror Midnight Clock Chime

I know it is not fitting for the Christmas season but here is a scary track I'm working on. I started this on October 28th but decided to work on it more as my music-know-all friend decided to take Christmas vacation wit us. I have lots of advises so I am inspired to keep on music composing.

 

A good way to build tension would be to have the "melodic line" so some more places, step-wise of course :) you did a good job establishing its purpose, but in order to extend this idea, making it go lower would express the mood while making it go higher would heighten tension. 

The bass here is pretty good. My only gripe is that it could be a lot more helpful to the melody by using major sevenths or minor sevenths, etc.

Reference to melodic lines: