Trouble

This is a lil track I chucked together recently and i was trying to create a piece for a moment building in tension. I haven't really done a piece like this one that I've liked too much but this one was the first that kinda worked the best for me. Sooo anyway here it is! Love to know what you guys think :D

Hi Ben,

I enjoyed it. Your ''moment building in tension'' works very well, there is a clear climax. I still have some feedback:

The theme you use is fine, but it can be developed more. In my opinion, the music is too repetitive from 1:00, even when you vary in dynamics and the use instruments. 
I hope you find the feedback useful.

Maarten

This music has a lot going for it except propulsion. It has motion, yes. But if you want to kick it up to the next level, try varying the bass line away from the monotone G. Just about anything would work in Gm scale. I leave it to you when and how. Small things make a difference when it's in the bass. Why not try it and repost?