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Experimenting with a bit of minimalism in a really grand, cinematic style, with exception of the V section, of course. I quite like the results, even if the piece is a little bit too simple. 

 

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I like it.

Only thing I found to be distracting was the introduction as I didn't expect it to last too long. Although perhaps the tempo makes up for it.

Loving the bigger section however the way you structured it made me crave more. 

Overall, it's lovely :cool:

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4/4 on the beginning sounded really odd to me on my first listen, but on second listen i got it, but the pulse is weird. then i hear 7/4 man you have me counting!!! can i see the score?

maybe you can spice up the harmonies sometimes when working with mostly the same melody. because the harmony was a bit like unsalted peanuts.

also, when im thinking about cinematic, i think about epic build-ups or spontaneous stuff. 

takadimi! :cool:

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1 minute ago, Casper Belier said:

because the harmony was a bit like unsalted peanuts.

That's an awesome way to phrase that :grin: Yeah, this was a part of daily sketches series (short piece everyday) but that's no excuse, I suppose. I should have had the mind to vary the harmonies. :happy: Score's attached for you!

4 hours ago, LostSamurai said:

Only thing I found to be distracting was the introduction as I didn't expect it to last too long.

I agree that's definitely a shortcoming. Hopefully it didn't impact the experience too much!

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