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It's wonderful. Motivic with a clear dynamic arc. 
I would be a little more careful with crossed voices, especially in louder parts where the arc of a singular line needs to be brought out in the counterpoint. 
Speaking of, some more homophony could be useful in making singular arcs or periods more clear.
But generally, it's really very lovely.
Cheers!

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