classical Sound of Queanbeyan

Since moving to Queanbeyan, I've enjoyed the nature surrounding there. This was made from the impression I've got there.

Some problems with counterpoints, specifically passing tones in the bass. They make the melody seem atonal when it's not.
The section with an A minor bass and something modal in the soprano (tonic E or B) I can tell is supposed to be a contrast. Maybe even a low point. But other than the notes, I wasn't really given a big impression on that. Dynamics or tempo can really bring that out.
You have some classically sparse textures which is nice, but it's a bit too consistent, in my opinion. Perhaps making some variation in that can make this feel more like a progression through scenes, etc.
Good work so far, cheers!

21 hours ago, Monarcheon said:

>Some problems with counterpoints, specifically passing tones in the bass. They make the melody seem atonal when it's not.
 

Thank you for your comment. Did you mention the section written in E minor? Surely the bass and soprano are playing independently in that section. Although I've tried to follow the manner of a symphony written by Mozart, the counterpoint is hard for me..