selcukozer001 Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 Dear friends, I've been working on a romantic piano song for a while. I've just finished it and wanted to present you. I've been inspired by popular piano song "it's hard to say goodbye" when composing it. I really want to know the strong and weak parts of it. I will really appreciate if you take your time and send me a feedback. Best regards, Selcuk Ozer MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu crying alone > next Quote
Luis Hernández Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 I think it's nice but there is no change in the rhythmic pattern. A bit of variation would be great! Quote
Adrian Quince Posted March 2, 2017 Posted March 2, 2017 In addition to Luis' comment, it would be nice to hear greater variation in the range and dynamics. Quote
Martim Manuel Posted March 8, 2017 Posted March 8, 2017 Its very repetitive, and some parts are a little bad organized. But I like the harmonic construction Quote
selcukozer001 Posted March 9, 2017 Author Posted March 9, 2017 Dear @Luis Hernández @Adrian Quince and @Martim Manuel Thanks for your constructive comments. I understand what you mean and I'll remember your suggestions when composing my next song. Quote
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