Seraphus - Drizzle

I've created separate thread since there were some issues with multiple songs starting on my last thread so.....here is my new song, feel free to make any suggestions about it.

Quieter drums to start out. Also fill in that section with a little bit more sound to balance them out it sounds empty after the initial gestures.
That kind of section also goes on for too long. It lost my interest mid-way in. The softer section with the B∆7 was lovely with drums and could have gone into that earlier.
Overall, it needs to ebb and flow a bit more in my opinion. A lot of it stays stagnant and I think a mix of louder and softer sections could keep this piece going a little longer than it initially did.

Cheers!

Now that you've mentioned it I can hear it too :). Although I had specific "vision" how additional themes would be added to main theme (like when rain drops fall), now I can hear it really does lack variations, so I will probably rework it.

And I will definitely have to invest in better equipment, obviously I have trouble with drums level in my songs...

Thanks for your suggestions and your comment, it's really helpful.