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I was going through some old basement tapes and I found this one and I thought that I would share it with you. It's not too bad! I never did anything with it, just another wisp of an idea ... Maybe I should have called it The Things We Leave Behind.

 

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This kind of reminds me of an album Kevin Welck and Kieren Kane did together called "can't save everybody". It's a nice chart, I like the way you voice led the chord changes - it felt very natural and kept the tune moving forward.

I might consider adding some "moments" on top of the melody, having the accompaniment and vocal melody interact a little more. But in all it's quite nice :)

Gustav Johnson

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You're right about the moments. That's a good way to put it. It does need more moments. I didn't leave any room for instrumental breaks and such.

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