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Your use of processes in the music is really nice because it makes everything flow; melodic fragments repeat and it progresses the piece nicely.
I would encourage you to experiment further with chord structure. It's very triadic with instances of passing tones giving the impression of extended tonality, but not really. Suspensions and retardations in particular would really give certain moments, especially in minor, that extra heart-wrenching edge.
Good work!

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