BH06 Posted June 5, 2017 Posted June 5, 2017 hey everybody ! first of all, I know that my work is far from being perfect. in fact, I did it as a recreation, so, I didn't want to loose time in velocity and mastering correction. It's obiously less worked than my first post ( I invite you to discover it or just hear it again: ). That's why, I'd say that I only share this link by patriotism. Who knows ? maybe It could indirectly lets someone discover my little and very welcoming country and encourage him to come for holidays thank you and I wish you very nice day ;) Quote
Monarcheon Posted June 6, 2017 Posted June 6, 2017 Pretty militaristic, no? I'm just wondering if that's what you want. To me, there's a difference between patriotic and militaristic. Anyway, it supports the melody nicely, though near the end before the cadential extension, I would do your best to make sure the phrase sounds like it was completed correctly. It sounds randomly cut off before the big ending. The soft part I think could use a change of style, kind of like how the American one leaves its march like quality to go into a more soft-spoken version. Reason being, I just felt that despite the soft sound, the quality of the work didn't really change there. Cheers==--- Quote
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