Feedback/Suggestions on this orchestral remake?

Hello ^^

I'm a 17 years old young composer, and I recently made this remake of two Paper Mario's music. If you don't know Paper Mario, it's an excellent game on the Nintendo 64, I suggest you to listen to his OST. So as I said, I made my own orchestration of two musics, and I'd like to know what you think about it. 

Here's a link to my remake: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GUe5ka6raro

I hope you'll like it :D

Hey, I don't know the original one; I only really know TTYD, but from what I can tell, this sounds pretty good.
I would be careful about so many octave doublings, simply because it opens the atmosphere of the orchestration rather than focus it which is what I think you want in certain sections, but I can't say much without having known the original. Good job!

9 hours ago, Monarcheon said:

Hey, I don't know the original one; I only really know TTYD, but from what I can tell, this sounds pretty good.
I would be careful about so many octave doublings, simply because it opens the atmosphere of the orchestration rather than focus it which is what I think you want in certain sections, but I can't say much without having known the original. Good job!

 

Thanks a lot for the commentary!