jana Posted July 25, 2017 Posted July 25, 2017 This piece "came through me" all at once on a sunny afternoon. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu chopsticks > next Quote
Monarcheon Posted July 26, 2017 Posted July 26, 2017 Well, first off, that final chord was begging for a resolution, even if it was one with extensions. Overall, it has a great feel with the descending line, but the fact it never leaves that bothers me a bit. Yes, I know, jazz and the consistency of bass and all that but the lack of a typical "melody line" calls for a little bit more eccentrics with the flow of the piece. Quote
markstyles Posted July 27, 2017 Posted July 27, 2017 Quite lovely.. a little bit more variation in right hand 1/8th notes.. A melody would be nice, but then you couldn't perform it the way it is now, without changing up the right hand.. Really sets a comforting feeling, like the desending line.. Quote
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